April 22nd, 2004

“Tenaciousness” for “tenacity” (a physicist interwiewed on ABC News)

“Impetuousness” for “impetuosity” (from Inversions, by Iain Banks)

These seem to me to illustrate the two poles of “ness” monstrosity: “tenaciousness” is a long, ugly substitute for “tenacity,” a nice, vigorous word.

By contrast, “impetuosity” actually adds a syllable to “impetuousness.” The claim that “impetuosity” is superior must rest either on educated usage (since it’s hard to argue that the -ity ending is truly more regular than the -ness ending) or on the avoidance of the ugly repeated sibilant of “ousness.” [Update: my source points out that the stress pattern of "impetuosity" makes it more suitable in poetic us than "impetuousness. Fair enough.]

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